I Need Opinion On My Letter of Offer.

[stayyoung]

Hi. People visit my site and ask a free medical question. I respond with some information on their ailments and encourage them to go for full Online medical consultation. But it's not working, they are not biting! I would love your opinion on this letter. Is it too timid? What can I do for you in return? Thanks.
Andrew Rynne.

[HerbertHagell]

Hi Andrew,

Please post the url for the letter.

[stayyoung]

Thanks. The letter does not have a url. Here is a copy of it. It is not converting to sales. How can it be improved allowing for the sensitive nature of what I'm attempting here. I usually add in a bit of information about their complaint.


Dr Andrew Rynne,
The Woods Surgery,
Clane,
Co. Kildare.
IRELAND.
Phone: 00 353 45 868305.
Registration: Irish Medical Council No. 008776.


September 13th 2011.






Hi there,

Thank you very much indeed for visiting my website and for posting your question there.

I may be able to help you with this and would be happy to try and do so. I would need to have a few more details from you however through my Online Questionnaire.


Let me help you further. Please purchase online consultation with me and we can start to sort this out for you right away. Thanks again.



Andrew Rynne


Andrew Rynne. MD

http://www.doctorrynne.com

Online Medical Help When You Need It.